Friday, November 14, 2014

Key Ingredients


  • A Great Lede
1. The name of the client. "But a law enforcement official and another person briefed on the case have identified Client 9 as Eliot Spitzer, the governor of New York.
The details of how this came to be. "A 47-page affidavit from an F.B.I. agent investigating a prostitution ring.
To show this wasn't the first time she had been hired by him. "a return customer, "
2. Her height and weight."5-foot-5, 105 pounds."
How you would describe her looks"Pretty and petite"
3. I do this seems really interesting and I want to know more.


  • Description

4. "legs tucked into her emaciated chest."
"Though she looked old enough to be in school,"
"Her ribs and collarbone jutted out;"
5. "she was naked"
"crawling with lice."
6. There are bugs in her room, she is malnourished, she has lice, and she has no clothes but a diaper.
7. Yes this is the saddest thing and I want to know if she is okay and not dead or anything!


  • Quotes
8. He is a person shocked by the child center being burned down and that is why they mentioned everyone looking at it because children are so innocent.
9. I do but I don't. This is so sad but I want to know if anything else is damaged or anyone else is hurt besides the children.


  • Anecdotes
10. "ranch hands were fixing a water pipe on private land in a narrow canyon"
"nearly 1,000 firefighters were trying to box the fire into a small area."
"Sparks from a metal grinder jumped into some dry grass.
11. "Rainfall the previous winter had been among the lowest on record in Southern California."
"facing a potential monster."
12. The story of how the fire started.
13. They were trying to fix the metal pike that started the fire.
14. Yes I want to know what happened to the fire and what it did.


  • Background Information
15. "Wildfire costs are busting the Forest Service budget."
"state wildfire spending has shot up 150% in the last decade,"
" Last year, it spent $1.37 billion."
16."state wildfire spending has shot up 150% in the last decade,"
17. Yes this is actually a scary thing that we are facing and especially in California. 



1 comment:

  1. wowe avery thank u so much i had no clu this wus going lik thnk u #Grateful

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