News: StuCo collects canned food
Summary:
Student Council asked for donations from the school to donate to the seasonal food drive. This was to give back to those that won't have holiday meals this season.
Who was quoted in the story?
Keri Tharpe, Shelby Johnson, Mary Moore, Patricia Maney, and Madi Little were quoted.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"Those who don't suffer, those who aren't in need don't understand their privileges,"
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes because the lead sounded interesting and I wanted to know more about what they were talking about.
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A quote.
Commentary: 'Bootylicious' Kardashian drama
Summary:
Kim Kardashian released a photo shoot called "Break the Internet" which includes a photo of her balancing a champagne glass on her butt and champagne being opened and landing in the glass. There was many different opinions that this is cool, or crippling the self-image of women and being like a sexual object.
Who was quoted in the story?
No one was quoted in this story.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
There was no quotes.
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes hit did because I had seen the photos of her and I wanted to know this person's opinion of it.
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A statement.
Student Life:
Entertainment: iPhone 6 out and trending
LEAD: "IPhones have been a part of the school since the fist one was released in June of 2007. Now, Apple's most recent models, the iPhone 6 and 6 Plus, are held in the hands of eager iPhone users."
Summary:
The new iPhone 6 and 6 Plus came out in September and many people have upgraded to the new phone. People are mostly happy about it except how thin it is and the camera sticking out of the phone.
Who was quoted in the story?
Tiffany Maxie, Kylie Wood, Ken Tsang Nina Tinsley, and Kayln Holloway were all quoted.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"My old iPhone 4S was cracked and old. Compared with my old one, this is an awesome phone."
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes it did because I wanted to know about the new phone!
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A statement.
Sports: Aspiring dancers tryout for team
Summary:
Tryouts to become a Silver Star were Nov. 17-21 after school. Returning Silver Stars had to retry out too and they all learned a jazz and kick routine to perform to judges.
Who was quoted in the story?
Sierra Webb, Connie Le, Sydney Pattison, and Nicole Byrom were quoted.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"There is a lot more work put into it. In middle school we had practices during our classes, but in Silver Stars we have to get to school every morning to practice, It's a lot more tiring, emotionally and physically."
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes I wanted to read more about the Silver Stars and what people said about the tryouts.
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A quote.
In-Depth: A dimension of sight, a dimension of sound, and a dimension of mind
Summary:
Technology for phones including social media has grown significantly in the past years. Some students love social media and what technology can do and could do in the future while others feel like sometimes social media is overused for communication.
Who was quoted in the story?
Madison Jackson, Minh-Thi Nguyen, and Emily Gonzales were quoted.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"I would rather call up a friend and hang out with them in real life than stare at a screen to communicate with them over Twitter or Instagram,"
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes I wanted to know what this article was about.
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A statement.
My suggestions:
1. Editors opinion on Valentine's Day and how they feel about the holiday.
2. The news story about the 7 year old girl surviving the plane crash when the rest of her family died.
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