So many animals are stuck zoos all over the world
when they should be free to roam around in the wild and I know that there are
problems in zoos that are not suitable for animals.
African elephants that live in the wild their whole
life live 3 times longer than those that are kept in zoos and Asian elephants
working in timber camps live longer than the ones born in a zoo. That is a
defining number of how much longer wild African and Asian elephants live than
the ones that live in zoos.
We do not have the right to capture, confine and
breed wild animals even if they are endangered. Just because they are becoming
endangered doesn't make it okay to take their species to try to make them breed
in the zoo.
I understand that zoos are important to teach kids
and adults about the animals in the world and that is important but animals
should not be treated the way they are in zoos. You could easily research the
animal or have a center where people can go and learn about animals.
If an animal is very close to extinction I
understand breeding them but you need to release them after breeding because
they won’t live as long and rarely does the breeding help endangered survive.
Of the 1,370 species involved in a survival plan by
the International Union for the Conservation of Nature, only 1.4 percent of the
species were likely to be reintroduced to the wild after the captive breeding
they had in zoos.
Animals are put in zoos to be able to live without
harm and are safe within their cage but animals are on the earth to live in the
wild and live freely and do what they are on the earth for.
All animals suffer from the habitats they are
limited in because of the limitation of space for them to go and they are given
anxiety due to that fact.
Their freedom is limited because a zoo is like a
prison for animals who long to free in their own habitat as said by the People
for the Ethical treatment of Animals.
Their habitats cannot be duplicated as much as zoos
try they will never be the same size or environment as their natural habitats.
The cost of a zoo is more expensive that
conservation. According to Wildlife New Zealand Zoo Watch Website, the average
cost for a Black Rhino in captivity is about $16,000 while the cost of
protecting a wild habitat for one rhino would be around $1,000 per year.
People do love the zoo and it is fun to see all the
animals and they are card for and fed but it isn’t fun for the animals. They
want to get out of there in that enclosed space and be free.
Something to fix this is decrease the number of
zoos in the world and let the animals be free in the wild. Instead of funding money to make zoos, people
could be funding money to preserve habitats that are becoming less efficient.
This would let the animals be free in the world and
even though there are predators that kill, that is a part of life and how it
works in wildlife. We should not remove them from their habitat and let them
live the life and have the freedom they are meant to have.
I thought your story was very interesting and I like how you stood by your opinion throughout the entire story. You could work on maybe rephrasing parts of the story however, and there are a few grammatical errors, but over all it was a great story. :)
ReplyDeleteI liked your story and thought it was was well written. It was very interesting and you clearly stated your opinion. You could have added some quotes but otherwise it was a good story.
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